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Hi guys! This is my very first PBJ story! I'm sorry the first chapter is so short, I just felt like it was a good place to stop. I'm going to try and update at least once a week. I hope ya'll enjoy. Don't forget to review and on to the story!

The smell of fries and hamburgers wafted out as I opened the door to the local pool hall. It was the hangout for my friends and me, but I went everyday after my classes at the college. "Uhh, do you want your usual sir?" said the cute Hispanic boy as he wheeled up to my table.

"Hehe, yeah motherfucker. Same motherfucking thing, do ya'll have motherfucking Faygo yet?" I say winking at him

"Uhh, I-I don't think we'll be getting Faygo anytime soon. You're the only person that would order it. So that'll be an order of fries, a slice of chocolate cake, and a cup of Hi-C with sprite, right?"

"Yeah, that's all I want motherfucker"

He goes to the window to clip the order and grabs a glass and fills it with my drink. He wheels back over and sets it on the table. "I've been coming here for over three months and I still don't know his name," I think to myself. He soon brings out my food on a tray in his lap and sets it on the table. I eat as sit thinking and stealing glances as the cute Hispanic boy. I finish up my food and leave a tip of five dollars on the table. I go to the register and pay. "Hey what's your motherfucking name?"

"Uhh, who? M-me?"

"Hehe, well, yeah you motherfucker. Who else?"

"Uhh, w-well, my name is Tavros."

"Tavros, huh? Tavros, Tavros, Tavros, how about I call you Tavbro. Oh, here's my number and shit bro." I write my name and IM usertag on a napkin. "I'd love to get to know a cute mother fucker like you." I say walking out. I notice he was bright red as I was walking away. "Damn motherfucker is so cute."
This is a GamTav Homestuck fanfiction! It's also up on if you look it up!
Chapter 1 [link]
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fakekira101 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me likey~
DeviousMudkipz Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ha, its rly good! :D you should continue it!
NoahVsTheWorld Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
hehe! thanks! I have been!
Tomato-the-Capricorn Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes ye syes yesy eysteyyyessssssssssss
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